Comedy Intros, one success, one failure

My video production teacher asked me to do the video introductions for the comedy category at the Northwest High School Film Festival. The first thing I gave him, he didn't like so much:

Comedy! from Kelton Sears on Vimeo.

For some reason, he thought this one was okay though:

Comedy Intro NWHSFF 2009 from Kelton Sears on Vimeo.